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13 years 16 hours ago #33354 by farzam

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Replied by farzam on topic ترانه : مورفین (Morphine)

تو خوده شعر كه شي شنيده ميشه !!!!

بعدم اخه با فاصله ميگه:

she's tried

hard to convince her

او ( دختره ) تلاش ميكرد

سخت بود متقاعد كردن او ( دختره )

در مورد اون صداهاي كه زير مياد هم منم خيلي كنجكاو بودم ببينم چيه صداي مايكل عجيب خيلي....

She works so hard, just to make her way
For a man who just don’t appreciate

13 years 13 hours ago #33355 by kingmichael

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Replied by kingmichael on topic ترانه : مورفین (Morphine)

تو این آهنگی که من دارم میگه he!!!

he's tried
hard to convince her

اگه این جمله پشت سر هم باشه she معنی نمیده !
ولی اگر هم جدا باشه hard to convince her خیلی جمله ی درستی نیست !
حداقل باید یه it's قبل جمله باشه
کلا به نظرم he بهتر باشه !

13 years 13 hours ago #33356 by rad

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منم میشنوم
he's tried
hard to convince her
شاید منظور از he پدره باشه که خسته شده چون دخترش به راحتی متقاعد نمیشه!
توی شعر که همه ی قواعد رعایت نمیشه که حتما it's بکار بره!

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12 years 11 months ago #33357 by kingmichael

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Replied by kingmichael on topic ترانه : مورفین (Morphine)

it's رو به عنوان مثال گفتم !!

به نظر من هم he پدرشه

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